MerwinAtticus's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Triangle Man]

I liked the color scheme and the simplistic pixel sprites.

You could have added some kinda sound effect when you blast an enemy ship.
And to me it looked like the missiles don't tend to come in contact with the enemy ships, it looked weird to me because it seemed to like hit an invincible force field before exploding.
You could also add in some weapon upgrades, and the movement should be restricted to only left and right like other space shooters.
But if you think that the concept of moving in any direction is better then i suggest putting the ship in the middle when the game begins.

Also you could add in a leader board and a point system using a counter for every ship destroyed, it makes the game interesting.
It is just my opinion.
And like the other person said, The game doesn't stop even after death.

So remember A for effort buddy.
Good Luck further !

[Pong]

It was an OK game for me, because you designed it so that the comp tried to connect the ball only with the center of the bar so that the ball goes straight , any when it rushes to try to connect the ball when it on the other end that is the only time the ball touches some other point.
If you look closely the bar adjusts itself so very lightly such that it hits the center.
And you do not want this because every gamer demands a challenge, or just from my point of view.
You could also put in some difficulty levels where you increase the speed of the ball.
So the top and the bottom has some kind of invincible border i guess, I suggest you make it look like the ball travels to the very end and not be stopped or bounce off of an invincible wall.
To me it looked awkward.
Hope you fix all of it so the next time you make another game you could learn to make it better.
So remember, it's always an 'A' for effort !
Well done and Good Luck further buddy !

[Lost In Nowhere Land 5]

Pretty cool.
Some places the spellings were wrong during the intro,Please recheck.
And there was no sound during the intro also.
I think you need some music there too.
Over all this was some solid game.
Loved the game play music.
It was challenging throughout each stage.
Well done and Good Luck Further !

[Death by carrot]

It was an ok game i guess, you could add some sound effects too.
Now all it needs is a leader board !
Well done and Good luck further !

Bluelightsky responds:

Hey stay there...
Guess sounds are placed in game? I think it is that way.
Now please tell me about the leader board... That is made in this site? In NewGrounds? If you could tell me more I would make it right away. I will place it anyway but would need to research first...

[Stacks+]

Cool concept.
You could change the background though.
I think it needs to show when to click, like some sort of accuracy detector.
Well done
Good Luck further.

Nytrik responds:

Thanks for taking the time to give some constructive feedback. I'm always looking for ways to improve my games.

[Bellies Up]

I must admit i liked the music in the background, the game not so much.
Literally I did nothing for 5 minutes and do you know how long 5 seconds if if you sit ideally doing nothing.
I tried to figure out the game but all i did was click on the fishy over and over again and saw the bar on the left rise and drop every time i clicked on the fish .
I think you need to put out instructions on how to play this game.
And this game needs a main menu.
Every game needs one !
I really liked the pixel art too.
Always remember 'A' for effort.
And there is always room for improvement.
Well done on the game you made.
Good Luck buddy !

[Don't drop the star!]

This game definitely needs a Main menu , with settings like basket response (rate of movement/speed), volume (mute) for people who mute games like this because if it continues on it tends to annoy.
I think you can improve from here.

And yes just like the other guy said, the stars follow a pattern and i think you must reconsider redoing it.
'A' for effort .
Good luck further !

Rasm419p responds:

Thanks for the feedback, i will work on a main menu. And i think it will be done at 15 - 11

[Hyperactive Soccer]

It is really hard to distinguish the jersey colors when i picked Germany vs Argentina in a friendly match.
It was almost impossible to say who had the ball.
I think you must redo the jersey colors or just check all the different possibilities with all the different countries and their jersey combinations just so that it could be easy to differentiate the teams.
Overall i liked the game and the pixel art was cool.
I think you could also add some bgm during game play.
This game has room for improvement.

Well done and Good luck further.

beppigames responds:

Every team already had two color sets and they are selected to avoid color collisions. GER/ARG was indeed edge case. Fixed it. There is no in-game music on purpose because the game stays true to its ancestor International Soccer (C64). Game is final, not in development (keeping it running of course).
I miss comments regarding gameplay and CPU opponent. Spent most of development time on that.

[2D Bird Simulator]

The game runs smooth but it is really hard to concentrate since you need to keep flying and dodge the beaks and also to collect worms and sticks.
I suggest you reduce the difficulty level.
Well done and good luck further !

[Eagle Ride]

This game has Room for growth.
liked the music and this concept of dodging obstacles is quite common but nothing like this.
I suggest increase the height of the eagle flying because it looks like its flying too close to the ground .
The graphics aren't really good but remember there is always room for improvement.
Well done and Good luck further !