MerwinAtticus's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[My First Game]

At least add some sound maybe.
For your first game, I would call this your first stepping stone, the next stone would be to add some quality sound to it. And the next stone would be- moving front and back.
Every time you reach a stone you get half a star.
I gave you half a star for your effort.
Good Luck further!

[Madness: Nevada Hotline]

This is one the best Games on here.
This game has great potential and a lot of room for improvement.
I think the characters were a little too small, maybe make it a little more big maybe an extra pixel or so.
Quick runs are always fun, this one definitely was worth playing.
you could make it more interesting by letting the hero do a small dash, like a slide or something so that the hero could dodge some shots at an instant.
This is just my opinion which i think would make it a little more interesting.
Along with the music score it made the game all the more awesome.
Good luck further.

io3creations responds:

Yeah, many improvements will be coming in the sequel.

Thanks for the dash idea. I haven't considered that but that could work. Especially, since I plan to add other types of enemies where that'll be very useful. ;)

[Shoot E'm]

More room for improvement.
This game is going no where with just one level
You could make it more interesting by letting the player move the character using the direction keys.
And you could take it to the next level by bouncing the bullets of the walls to hit the red thingy.
Good luck further.

[Castle Run]

I can understand that the game is still in the starting stages
In order to make the game play more interesting, i think you should increase vision upto a few more meters so that the player can decide either to pick coins or adjust his movement so that he could clear the next obstacle.
I think you understand me.
There is much room for improvement.
Good luck.

[GRAND ADVENTURE! (STORY COMPLETE)]

The game didn't load sorry, All i got was a white screen

Emptygoddess responds:

I'm very sorry to hear that, not sure how to help.

[Hare]

Id give it a 4 but the camera angle wouldn't let me. Jumping too high is one of the reason it stresses me out. Cool Sound track and animation was good.
overall a cool concept. Decrease the jump height so that the player doesn't get out of focus as to where he must land.That would greatly help this game in getting better.
Good Luck

Zelun responds:

Nice input, man. Will do it for sure!

[Lost and Found, Where in the world?]

Yea it was good but you could make it more challenging by adding a timer and also a bgm during game play

[Jet Stream Heroes]

The sound track is good. But it starts out really really loud.
and when u start the game you cant skip some where it tells about the hero and it froze for like a solid 30 secs, i thought the game hanged. but it did finish loading.
If you could increase the damage dealt by his weapon that would greatly improve in game progression.
I know the games only in its starting stage.
it could definitely become a better one in no time

[Pitching]

OMG. This is surely one of those games that stress the hell outta you !
Sure feels like the game I,Surrender