MerwinAtticus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic Crazyness 2!]

Could be worse but hey it was OK,
But for me it felt like there were too many scenes where it felt like the story didn't move on and it felt like an awkward pause after each scene.
Hope you keep this in mind and move on.
Good Luck further !

DannyShellstar responds:

the story didn't move on

[Lionboar]

Well Done.
The music in the background subconsciously was tapping into my feels.
Overall the story was good, but it would have been better if you showed how the lion came to that place.
But the title was a poor choice, as to that is what I felt.
Maybe you had something in mind in Spanish. I don't know.
But I definitely liked it.
Good Job on the animation.

Atzu responds:

Thanks Merwin.

I agree about the story. This is just a piece from a bigger story I wanted to animate as a test, and forgot that there was a lot not being explained. Tried coming up with some intros that made it longer and slower, so I decided only to finish it because it had taken too many years of my time in production.
The name Lionboar and Jabaleon in spanish is because, I know I never explain it here, both animals are actually the same.
Thanks for your time.

[Firelight]

Almost cried.
Well done

JoeliusNG responds:

I'm happy you enjoyed it :)